After receiving these comments I am pleased with the general themes that were involved in our trailer i. e acting, storyline, setting and camera work but perhaps some improvements were neccessary in the editing proccess with timings being the major problem. Overall I am very please with the response we got from the audience when we did a question and answer activity and filmed it in class. Below are some of the comments we received.

This is my Media work for AS Level. Monday, 20 September 2010. We looked at other action films to get inspiration for our own film. We were inspired by films like James Bond and the Bourne films. After looking at what is done in the opening sequences to action films we chose parts that we liked from other films to create our own opening sequence. From the audience feedback we have learnt that we need to think about costumes in more depth. Using conventions from real media texts-. Monday, 29 March 2010.

Tom- nice lads i like it. Jamie- pretty good, i enjoyed the sc.

Friday, 30 April 2010. To help collect ideas for my film and ideas of how to put a teaser trailer together. I watched the Saw teaser trailers to help with the whole torture scene and how to film that, and watched a few gangster teasers to get the way the gangsters should act. For the editing stages i use.

Hannah Thurlow, Laura-Jayne Way and Alana Shaw - G321. Monday, 26 April 2010. Our actual film into the bit which we are talking about, we decided to do this because we thought it would be different to what everyone else would do. By Hannah Laura and Alana. Task as in how to .